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    dots Submission Name: Freedomdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 96
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsFreedomdots
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    What is freedom?
    But stepping freely;
    More problems,
    When you seek them;
    And the sense of self-pity.

    Who roams the world,
    Knowing their worth,
    and purpose;
    With anger to make,
    My toe-nails curl,
    I know how to find God,
    Without having to go forth,
    To churches.

    What is the meaning,
    of freedom when you're all alone,
    It is demeaning,
    Like when I used to wake up,
    At other people's homes.

    Freedom is the decisions,
    That seem to make a difference,
    and not finding reasons;
    To become so arrogant,
    In finding what's not missing.




    Submitted on 2011-05-23 17:58:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I will be free the day i'm able to rid my self of sin completely, never to turn back again. to be able to trust myself to do the right thing all the time, that will set me free. that will be freedom for me...
    | Posted on 2011-05-24 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      Very good question. To me, freedom is the removal of self doubt, the ability to accept Christ as the one answer to all lifes trials. One is free when they can look into their hearts and see forgiveness, where hatred and bitterness is put aside.
    | Posted on 2011-05-24 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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