A word is an attempt at two-way communication. It carries a meaning intended by the speaker , but communication is only effected if the listener can interpret that word with the same meaning. Some words are inherently rich because they are understood by millions of people. Some are poor (impecunious) because they are understood by virtually nobody. Some are worse than poor because they exist only in the sterile world of the dictionary. Simply put, your poem does not work because it fails to convey meaning.