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    dots Submission Name: Lambentdots
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    Author: monad
    ASL Info:    64/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 1089/408/117
    Words: 41
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsLambentdots
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    Larcenous overtures sensorium inveteracies
    Rampart ransack oblation metaphysical sooth
    Obstinate obdurate obliquities tenacities
    Archaic anachronism futurity fortuity truth
    Unwarranted inordinate irreverence acuities
    Erogenous scarp fatidic foist couth
    Taciturn efficiencies sojourn prospectus annuities
    Precocious precursor preempt predication youth




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    ||| Comments |||
      A word is an attempt at two-way communication. It carries a meaning intended by the speaker , but communication is only effected if the listener can interpret that word with the same meaning. Some words are inherently rich because they are understood by millions of people. Some are poor (impecunious) because they are understood by virtually nobody. Some are worse than poor because they exist only in the sterile world of the dictionary. Simply put, your poem does not work because it fails to convey meaning.


    | Posted on 2014-07-02 00:00:00 | by hanuman | [ Reply to This ]
      Woah! Let me get out my dictionary lol. I loved where you were going with this piece, but I feel pretty terrible about not being able to understand what it is saying.
    | Posted on 2011-05-26 00:00:00 | by Anneboleyn707 | [ Reply to This ]


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