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    dots Submission Name: Introduction to my lifedots
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    Author: Getaadventure
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    dotsIntroduction to my lifedots
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    5/26/2567

    Name: Mark C. Grazer

    Age: 21

    Occupation: Tech-marine

    Destination: Dayton air and space center


    My name is Mark Criss Grazer. I am 21 years old about 5'9 and 150 Lbs, brown/black hair, and brown eyes. I am creating a journal to record my life after today. I am going to the new found planet named Geta. I am a tech-marine, so my specialties are in rifles and engineering. I have been called upon the United Empire States of America to go serve on this new found planet. An air transport picks me up at my house after i say goodbye to my wife and kids. As i bored the air ship i see that there are massive compared to me. The all have there personal items and weapons. I take a seat next to some one in the back lay my stuff on the clod metal floor and sigh. The ship pulls away from the house and heads for Dayton Air and Space center 23 miles from were we are now. The pilot announces it will take about 10- 15 minuets. I look at the guy next to me and he seems more nervous than me. I tap him on the shoulder to get his attention.
    "Hey you don't look so good. every thing all right?" I said calmly.
    He turns and looks at me smiling just a bit.
    "yeah i'm fine. Just a little nervous is all. Whats your name?"
    I look at him and put my hand out.
    "my name is..."
    i was interrupted by the captain on the intercom.
    "We are in the clear, i'm going turn on the X-drive. Your going to be strapped in now."
    Every one seems like they knew what it meant, sat up strait and look forward. A metal plate came down over all passengers bodies and pulled them into the hull and the air ship sped up. I could feel the G-forces almost double and the ship also seemed to double in length. After about 5 more minuets of this the ship slowed down, and we were ejected from the hull as the ship docked on the shuttle building.

    The Ships docking clamps engaged and the doors opened. Every body on the ship hurried off and stood in a line just out side the boarding doors. I gather my things and help the guy next to me and walk out getting in the line seeing a man who is probably a general or some other high ranking officer. HE just stares at us then turns around and every body follows him. I just look around and just do the same. This place is like one giant airport. Shops every were, ships taking off and landing every minuet, is just amazing. We come up to a large door that says:
    "Geta air space shuttle, boarding now"
    Apparently this shuttle will take us to Geta. I walk through the door and get strapped in on this massive shuttle almost the size of an air battle ship, and those are the size of sky scrapers and larger. As i strap myself in, it seems that civilians are also boarding which made some sense because we did have a few colonies on the planet. it seemed like hours for the ship to have all its passengers aboard and the captain gave all the safety rules and procedures. The docking clamps disengaged and the massive ship took off heading for the moon space jump station. I was on my way to a new world.




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