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    dots Submission Name: Solitudedots
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    Author: vedanta19
    Elite Ratio:    3.28 - 503/510/143
    Words: 85
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsSolitudedots
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    Fleeting, Floating
    Awaiting..
    such rare moments of love -
    leave self gasping;

    Often,
    almost every hour of a day,
    Self-doubt dominates self-respect;

    Under a tearful moonlight,
    unshed hope plead to be discovered;

    When all is done,
    Would prayers lead to utopian heavenly gates;

    Or

    Just self who would left hoping,
    like love
    that never arrived?

    The faithful moon tries to stay
    calm, strong
    unaffected;

    While turmoil uncalms
    naive heart;

    in times of solitude.





    Submitted on 2011-05-27 15:53:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hi it was nice to read your writing again and also to get a comment
    i liked your version of solitude very true to the words i posted that thot along time ago maybe read it if you want
    i am happy you enjoyed the eyes of love and thanx for the comment

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-05-30 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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