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    Author: EEKS
    Elite Ratio:    2.7 - 647/1206/773
    Words: 97
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    We could get old together
    We could go to the park together, get a dog together, get our haircut together,
    We can make soup, you like soup even if I don't like soup
    and we could get jobs and work kind of hard even though I've heard that working hard can break your heart
    Maybe we could move to a big city or a little city or sleep on beaches, west coast or east
    We could get old together, side by side and your life could be my life, your heart my heart





    Submitted on 2011-05-29 01:14:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      awww....that's how i reacted. the perfect dream. if love was that easy! i like the innocense this potrays. clean, pure and serene..

    do write more...
    | Posted on 2011-06-01 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      hey and hi long time since i have read any of your writes this was good imagining a love like that
    good write
    and hope all is well

    sandman
    | Posted on 2011-05-30 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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