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    dots Submission Name: Messages From The Voiddots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 260
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsMessages From The Voiddots
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    Grasping comprehension of an ocean
    I went
    This expansion in an endless
    Sphere of light

    No time
    Is so hard to reiterate
    Can I explain
    The release

    It was the tactile potential
    I felt
    The impossible something
    Intriguing upon
    It could be done
    Anything the thought felt hinged upon
    Yes I knew
    It can be done

    Alive
    In countless motes
    Life
    Imbued
    Touched into this very essence of
    Encompassed

    Such serenity
    It was
    Such endless, boundless love
    It is

    Anything

    Everything

    Spoke the messages from the void

    Empty, emptiness
    Their childish concepts
    Made me smile
    As I held the overflow
    The sentience
    So exact
    So perfect
    And all its fluidity
    Was
    Is
    In
    Me

    Me
    You
    In the embrace of rock
    The intercepts speak
    Through the veins of wood
    A language coloured
    Collided
    Of wind swept lakes
    Resounding every droplet

    Is the focus point of someone else

    Each perfume exhaled
    Works its magic
    On a void so filled
    Beyond any measure
    To finite
    To eternal
    In a single
    Thought

    Timeless

    How else could it be
    The ocean is
    You
    Is
    Me
    And we
    Contain all that is
    Within a skin which touches
    All that was
    Was to be

    We all are one
    And we all
    Are free

    The messenger of the void
    Spoke to me
    Such is the ripple of you
    In reality

    And you walk here
    With me
    Constantly








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