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    dots Submission Name: The Pleiades dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 18
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    dotsThe Pleiades dots
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    Cluster star
    of 7
    Portal entry
    Heaven

    Born of
    Atlas
    PleIONe
    Daughters
    Industry

    ~*~




    Submitted on 2011-05-30 11:16:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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