I enjoyed the unorthodox flow of this piece. It shows a certain level of sanity, but also a smidgen of crazed lostness. The vast range of your talents can be explored in your work, and I greatly enjoyed this read.
this poem defies so many rules of poetry, yet breathes the very soul of it: a captured moment, a feeling.
The way I see it is something I often feel too. Sometimes attracted or otherwise caught up in some task of the world, reminding myself that this world is not my home. Yet the whole affair is still somewhat painful. And such nonsense comes to mind as bubbles and pies...or perhaps the end indicates the triviality of the issue.
All in all I liked it, although like I said it's a different kind of write. Sorry it took so long to comment, my internet connection is real bad!