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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 366
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Im Sorry
    Written by Dean Allen Thomas
    July17, 2006

    Im sorry for the way Ive acted, things Ive done, things Ive said
    But when the world looks the other way, it makes it hard to get ahead
    I know that in the past few years, Ive caused you lots of pain
    I never really intended to, because really whats to gain?

    I will love you all my life, through good times and through bad
    I know Ive hurt you many times, and thats what makes me sad
    I try my best to be a good man, through all the things I do
    But all that I keep hearing, is how much that Ive hurt you

    All that I ever wanted, was to have a real good life
    I thought it would be easy, with you as my loving wife
    When I think about my love for you, it makes me want to cry
    When I think about you being gone, it makes me want to die

    You are the woman Ill always love; this much I know is true
    I cant imagine living my life, in a world that doesnt contain you
    You are the most beautiful woman that I have ever known
    Im sorry for not showing you, the things I should have shown

    I tried to show you things in life that youve never known
    Now I sit here by myself, and feel so all alone
    All the trials in my life, have really gotten me down
    Its all so overwhelming, I feel like I might drown

    You are all that matters to me, Ill love you till I die
    And every time I think of you, all I can do is cry
    I swore to God I would cherish you till the end of days
    And I would never tell a lie because it never pays




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