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    dots Submission Name: Will I Ever Love Againdots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 440
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Will I Ever Love Again
    Written By Dean Allen Thomas, August 16, 2006

    Will I ever love again? I honestly can’t say
    I guess I’ll know for sure when there comes a day
    That all my pain has passed and I hurt no more
    That will be the time I figure out the score

    So far the broken hearts are way out in the lead
    But the loving hearts are not ready to concede
    There may be a chance that true love will win
    That’s when I’ll be ready to try to love again

    Until that day has come and gone, I will be alone
    Because you broke my heart with all the things you’ve shown
    You took my heart and I gave you trust to not break it in two
    Then there came the day you told me we were through

    That’s when my heart shattered in a million little pieces
    Because I always believed that true love never ceases
    You had told me that you would love me forever more
    But I didn’t feel that when you walked out the door

    All I felt was misery and pain on top of that
    All the things you told me really knocked me flat
    You told me you didn’t love me it took my breath away
    I couldn’t even speak or ask you please to stay

    Please don’t abandon me in all my pain and sorrow
    I don’t really know if I’ll make it till tomorrow
    Without you I feel so lost, I can’t find my way
    You promised me you’d never leave and you wouldn’t stray

    I guess your promises to me were all a bunch of lies
    And that putting my trust in you wasn’t very wise
    It took a lot of years to give you all my trust
    What you’re doing to me now just seems so unjust

    On you I placed my hopes and dreams for all the years to come
    I really hate to sit back and see what you’ve become
    What you’ve become isn’t the person that I fell in love with
    I get the feeling that true love is nothing more than a myth

    Now you say its time to go, to move on with your life
    We were supposed to be together forever when you became my wife
    Now you say that’s over and done, buried in the past
    Who would have ever thought, our love would never last

    Now I guess we say goodbye and go our separate ways
    But my broken heart is the only one that pays……….




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