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    dots Submission Name: Keep on Goingdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
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    dotsKeep on Goingdots
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    My body trembles
    Legs quiver
    Hands are shaking

    Theres no break
    No stopping
    Keep going

    Dont give up now you've almost got it
    Lost within the thoughts of a restless mind
    The things I imagine
    The crazy thoughts my mind creates due to lack of sleep

    Keep going
    Come on now

    I'm almost there....




    Submitted on 2011-05-31 13:55:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Happy day!

    This is the sentiment and the POWER I AM right NOW ~*~

    Keep On Keepin On Smiles to Share ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-06-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that was encouraging for me. Graceluf in it's deliverence. Nice.
    | Posted on 2011-05-31 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]


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