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    dots Submission Name: Keep on Goingdots

    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Rant/Passion
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    dotsKeep on Goingdots

    My body trembles
    Legs quiver
    Hands are shaking

    Theres no break
    No stopping
    Keep going

    Dont give up now you've almost got it
    Lost within the thoughts of a restless mind
    The things I imagine
    The crazy thoughts my mind creates due to lack of sleep

    Keep going
    Come on now

    I'm almost there....

    Submitted on 2011-05-31 13:55:14     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2011-06-04 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I think that was encouraging for me. Graceluf in it's deliverence. Nice.
    | Posted on 2011-05-31 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]

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