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    dots Submission Name: Tearzzzdots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Rant/Depressed
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    dotsTearzzzdots
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    The sweat drips from my forehead
    My eyes moist from the tears that are streaming down my cheeks
    I’m left alone
    I am my own worst enemy...

    Left with nothing but time
    All i think about is you!

    Tears fall from my red rosy cheeks
    Just as they have years ago
    Due to the abuse
    You did as you please
    You said you loved me

    You said... I was your little girl?
    What happen?
    How did i become your play toy?
    Was it written on my sweaty forehead?

    Daddy you broke my heart
    You have left me alone and hurting
    I will be my own demise!

    All due to the action you place upon me as a young innocent child!!!




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      I hope this was not a real life experience, if so my heart bleeds for you.
    Please strive to find a lighter side of life, your writings are tareing you apart. Don't linger on the pain, but consider the happy moments you have had.
    | Posted on 2011-06-02 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      This is very raw and I understand where you are coming from; to feel taken advantage of or hurt by a loved one.

    You had to have the experience but you don't have to carry the guilt. You can be made stronger and move forward with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-)
    | Posted on 2011-06-01 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]


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