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    dots Submission Name: Sometimesdots
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    Author: Latin King
    ASL Info:    31/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    2.39 - 104/232/145
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Something I thought of today.


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    dotsSometimesdots
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    There's glitches,
    In my life's chemistry,
    That even when I'm inspired,
    No riches,
    Bring forth happiness,
    And that still remains,
    A mystery;
    To the greatest buyer.

    I sometimes look up,
    With no intentions,
    Of looking down;
    Whenever I feel stuck,
    And my lamentations,
    Seem to get loud,
    I sit down, and hope,
    To never get down,
    From my escape cloud.





    Submitted on 2011-06-03 22:30:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Ya gotta be careful of those clouds, some have BIG ROCKS in them. LOL
    It is hard to be UP at all times and when one is always down, life can really start to suck.
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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