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    dots Submission Name: Repeats Performancedots
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    Author: col13x
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 119/300/559
    Words: 234
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 218
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1910



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    Every senario
    Every page in the historical record
    Every musical score in Hollywood

    Every newscast
    Every front page
    Every new tax
    Every new price increase
    Every new terrorist

    Every new war
    Every financial market crash
    Every newly prescribed drug
    Every football match

    Every new beat on religious fervour
    Every political answer
    All the problems
    And their solutions
    Every new contribution

    Every president, prime minister, head of state and dictator
    Every starving mouth

    Every new weapon
    Every new massacre and atrocity
    Every new oppression
    Every new fashion

    Every new soap opera
    Every new advert
    Every new theme in film
    Every documentary
    Every Christmas and birthday

    Every car, building, chair and home
    Every child and adult
    Every television, computer and music centre

    Every job
    Every wage packet
    Every debt

    Every day and every night
    Every class
    Every school


    Every new false flag operation
    Every new organisation
    Every new threat
    Every new technological advancement
    Every new pop idol
    Every new Oscar

    Every new symbol
    Every new convenience
    Explained away by expedience
    Every new momentary thrill

    Every minute and hour
    Every second
    Every twist and turn
    Suckled on the teat of indoctrination

    Every generation

    Repeats Performance

    Same flag, same nation, same opinion
    Same regurgitation
    Same shit
    Different century










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