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    dots Submission Name: Heterochromiadots
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    Author: lebeauvide
    ASL Info:    24/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.29 - 75/295/165
    Words: 95
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsHeterochromiadots
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    There is a darkness in you that I cannot explain
    Unmade decisions haunt you
    Crows fly behind heterochromic eyes
    The coloration changing as fast as your mind does

    A duality within you rages, internal conflict
    Double-edged and cruel as the day you were born
    You've hardened against the world
    But you used to be such a nice boy

    Striations in the pigmentation
    Strains of a virus that hides, dormant and waiting
    Much like me, it waits for you to give the order
    But your words are all that they are: words.





    Submitted on 2011-06-06 15:29:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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