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    dots Submission Name: Too Good to be Truedots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Lyrics/
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    dotsToo Good to be Truedots
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    So just when I thought I had a friend
    That proved to be true
    You went and undid it all
    You lied, cried, ran to hide and in the end I withdrew
    Cause I knew
    From the beginning
    It was just too good to be true

    Yeah it's true

    You did me wrong all along and now this song is for you
    You betrayed, you're crazed, and this was all a charade
    A game that you played
    And I was just a pawn in your way

    But to tell you the truth
    It was all just to good to be true
    And we're through
    Cause I had just about enough of you

    And there's no way that today
    Or some time far away
    This will ever be ok

    It's the truth
    Yeah it's true
    And Yes, I'm now over you




    Submitted on 2011-06-06 19:08:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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