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    dots Submission Name: :)dots

    Author: lori_tab
    ASL Info:    27/f/alabama
    Elite Ratio:    4.33 - 1752/1517/481
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Placed at the corner of a midnight building
    (the outisde did not look safe but foreboding)
    the shadow of a figure to suggest a character here
    and the echoes of breathing and forward footsteps

    Must have been walking in small circles

    Humming, the wind swept by
    And took along the trash that had been cuddled closely to the curb
    (Every activity is intentional, means something, reacts to the spark of life somewhere far and ancient down the line-----------------but young in a way we think of old)

    Submitted on 2011-06-07 13:27:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Deep. Reminds of American Beauty - the movie.
    | Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by Solomon Disease | [ Reply to This ]

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