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Author:	Darth Zeus
ASL Info:	21/F/Vacuum
Elite Ratio:	7.31 - 369/226/34
Words:	7

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	567
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Submitted on 2011-06-08 20:08:18 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

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this is interesting...the cadillac your soul mate..you are destined to crash..cadillacs are well built in all ways...

and most other cars would get the worst of it in a collision...so the crash could be...x and y meshing...or just having a tragic accident....or a fender bender...good love, bad love..or just getting to know each other...and contacting your insurance companies to see what the settlement would be...like a few dates maybe...???
"stole your heart/ and crashed your steel"
i like that..

this piece is short and abstract...my favorite kind of poem..

thanks for the read.

jacob
| Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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