CC by Darth Zeus

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dots

<< | >>

Submission Name: CC dots

--------------------------------------------------------

Author:	Darth Zeus
ASL Info:	21/F/Vacuum
Elite Ratio:	7.31 - 369/226/34
Words:	7

Class/Type:	Misc/Misc
Total Views:	727
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	38

Description:

-------------------------------------------

content has been removed by the author

Submitted on 2011-06-08 20:08:18 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

1: >_<
2: I dunno...
3: meh!
4: Pretty cool
5: Wow!

||| Comments |||
this is interesting...the cadillac your soul mate..you are destined to crash..cadillacs are well built in all ways...

and most other cars would get the worst of it in a collision...so the crash could be...x and y meshing...or just having a tragic accident....or a fender bender...good love, bad love..or just getting to know each other...and contacting your insurance companies to see what the settlement would be...like a few dates maybe...???
"stole your heart/ and crashed your steel"
i like that..

this piece is short and abstract...my favorite kind of poem..

thanks for the read.

jacob
| Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece? 7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?

191244

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.
Jar (working title) written by rev.jpfadeproof
Orange written by saartha
BlackBerry Bushes written by Daniel Barlow
Hurt written by rev.jpfadeproof
Blank Page written by Chelebel
Ardent written by saartha
Still written by rev.jpfadeproof
Shading written by saartha
Eyes written by homeless
Dreamt written by rev.jpfadeproof
Outside the Chain written by Wolfwatching
Variety written by saartha
Luchinushka written by HisNameIsNoMore
After a Dream written by KeeperOfLight
Tidal written by OneDarkFlame92
Untitled - May 14, 2017 written by homeless
More written by homeless
Chapter written by Crestfallenman
Reveled Night written by rev.jpfadeproof
Buried written by MyPeriodical
Untitled 2 written by homeless
April 1, 2018 written by homeless
Chèvrefeuille written by rev.jpfadeproof
Summer of Peaches written by rev.jpfadeproof
X written by homeless
Hazy Half-Moon written by rev.jpfadeproof
Don't Tell Me You Love Me written by homeless
Forget written by Crestfallenman
Starry night written by rev.jpfadeproof
'Cause You're Mine, I Walk the Line. written by Torie

Enter your search terms Submit search form

Web www.eliteskills.com

[ Quick Signup ]
[ Lost Password ]

January 10 07
131,497 Poems
Posted

I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

[ Angst Poetry ]
[ Cutters ]
[ Famous Poetry ]
[ Poetry Scams ]

FontSize:
[ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.