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Author: Darth Zeus
ASL Info:    21/F/Vacuum
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Submitted on 2011-06-08 20:08:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is interesting...the cadillac your soul are destined to crash..cadillacs are well built in all ways...

and most other cars would get the worst of it in a the crash could be...x and y meshing...or just having a tragic accident....or a fender bender...good love, bad love..or just getting to know each other...and contacting your insurance companies to see what the settlement would a few dates maybe...???
"stole your heart/ and crashed your steel"
i like that..

this piece is short and favorite kind of poem..

thanks for the read.

| Posted on 2011-06-08 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]

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