Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Inner Light ~*~dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 585
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 182



    Description:
       Life, young adults, relationships, kids....IT IS & I AM ~*~


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsInner Light ~*~dots
    -------------------------------------------


    Guide me
    O Inner Light
    2
    Bliss
    E
    I
    N
    Growth
    A
    I
    Nothing yet Everything
    O
    With Smiles to Share ;-)




    Submitted on 2011-06-08 21:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      The inner light is bursting out of this piece. Many can't get beyond the darkness, from the lack of a guiding light.
    A good write, that cwill be overlooked by some.
    | Posted on 2011-06-09 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    191245

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    This written by Chelebel
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    Bond written by saartha
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching
    To written by SavedDragon
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    new moon written by CrypticBard
    Giving written by jjd
    In the Mouth of Elysium written by HisNameIsNoMore
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    untitled written by Chelebel
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Song written by Daniel Barlow
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel
    It's been a while written by Sharati_hottie
    Linger written by saartha
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    Cage written by distortedcloud
    Incubus written by monad
    Break Up written by WriteSomething
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry