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Inner Light ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 23
Class/Type: Prose /Love
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Life, young adults, relationships, kids....IT IS & I AM ~*~


Inner Light ~*~



Guide me
O Inner Light
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Bliss
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Growth
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Nothing yet Everything
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With Smiles to Share ;-)




Submitted on 2011-06-08 21:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  The inner light is bursting out of this piece. Many can't get beyond the darkness, from the lack of a guiding light.
A good write, that cwill be overlooked by some.
| Posted on 2011-06-09 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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