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    dots Submission Name: Inner Light ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 586
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 182



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       Life, young adults, relationships, kids....IT IS & I AM ~*~


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    dotsInner Light ~*~dots
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    Guide me
    O Inner Light
    2
    Bliss
    E
    I
    N
    Growth
    A
    I
    Nothing yet Everything
    O
    With Smiles to Share ;-)




    Submitted on 2011-06-08 21:35:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      The inner light is bursting out of this piece. Many can't get beyond the darkness, from the lack of a guiding light.
    A good write, that cwill be overlooked by some.
    | Posted on 2011-06-09 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]


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