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    dots Submission Name: a big ole jumble of feelings.dots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Serious
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    dotsa big ole jumble of feelings.dots
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    nothing ever stays the same
    and im so thankful for that these days
    cause the past is moving so far away
    and the present is making me crave the next day.

    this road that im walking down
    is becoming so large these days
    im no longer walking alone
    and i wouldnt want it any other way.

    i sometimes think that this isnt real
    that somethings gonna happen
    and im gonna wake up in my bed
    and realize it was all a dream.

    but baby things are perfect, or as close as it can be
    and im not reaching goals, but im closer everyday
    so dont pray for my wicked ways
    cause their molding and shaping me.

    stop and smell the roses my mother always said
    so i tattooed the perfect petals on my arm
    and everyday i think of her
    and everyday i miss her more.

    i wouldnt change anything
    not something small nor big
    i love the way things have turned out
    i love the dark and i love the light.

    so lets say goodnight and lay down our heads
    say our prayers and pray for someone else instead
    look to tomorrow cause the sun still rises
    and look back just because you can..




    Submitted on 2011-06-09 17:51:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Yeah me too...i loved the last stanza best.
    '...say our prayers and pray for someone else instead...'
    Sometimes it seems we pay too much attention to ourselves and we forget others. It is a really selfless thing to do...putting your headaches aside and praying for someone instead.
    | Posted on 2011-06-12 00:00:00 | by Amma | [ Reply to This ]
      This is delightful!

    I loved:

    "look to tomorrow cause the sun still rises
    and look back just because you can.."



    | Posted on 2011-06-10 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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