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    dots Submission Name: An Airheads Complexity ( part 3 ) dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsAn Airheads Complexity ( part 3 ) dots
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    Lurking with its unbidden ghost
    Behind every smile
    We know

    “ Let go ”

    There was something
    Somewhere
    Once long ago
    That even now we all remember

    It call to us
    From deep, so deep
    Within the memories of our soul

    “Let go ”

    And we ache with the longing
    So whispered
    Within the ageless rivers of our lives

    To be once more
    That which we knew

    You know

    Yes you do

    We all do

    “ Let go ”

    This is why so many seek
    Alternate ways to fill the question of
    And why so many
    Of the fleeting answers
    Offer them no cause or satisfaction

    And this is why
    They hunger for the world
    When the world is right there before them

    They cannot hear the answer

    “ Let go ”

    Even though it rings like a monumental BELL !
    Through them

    They reject the very idea
    That anything
    So profound
    In all its implication
    Could ever be

    So simple

    “ LET GO ”




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