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An Airheads Complexity ( part 2 )


Author: col13x
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An Airheads Complexity ( part 2 )






Reach out
Beyond the clouds
Reach out
Into the stars

THIS IS YOU

Part of it all
Stretch your imagination
Into the reality
Hold the galaxies
See them
Feel them
All

UNIVERSAL

THIS IS YOU

Push yourself
Past
The confines
Of your gravity

Beyond the clouds

And into eternity

Do you see it

Do you

THIS IS YOU







Submitted on 2011-06-11 09:01:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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