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    dots Submission Name: An Airheads Complexity ( part 2 ) dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsAn Airheads Complexity ( part 2 ) dots
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    Reach out
    Beyond the clouds
    Reach out
    Into the stars

    THIS IS YOU

    Part of it all
    Stretch your imagination
    Into the reality
    Hold the galaxies
    See them
    Feel them
    All

    UNIVERSAL

    THIS IS YOU

    Push yourself
    Past
    The confines
    Of your gravity

    Beyond the clouds

    And into eternity

    Do you see it

    Do you

    THIS IS YOU







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