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    dots Submission Name: An Airheads Complexity ( part 1 )dots
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    Author: col13x
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    dotsAn Airheads Complexity ( part 1 )dots
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    There are some who live by fear
    And there are those who live by love
    Those who believe their perceptions
    Should not be constrained or altered

    There are some who think belief
    Should be guided and dictated
    They believe in the doctrines
    Which relieve them of any responsibility

    And all their laws and rules
    Tell them how things should be
    And damned be they to hell
    All those who think and act a little differently

    There are some who see
    The shadow cast upon this world
    And in the darkness of its aggression
    They are forced to do as they are told

    There are some who cannot close their eyes
    Nor willingly close their heart and mind
    To the inflicted suffering
    Of their fellow human beings

    There are some for whom this knowledge
    Is an icicle in their soul
    And it writes itself into every aspect
    Of the false and intimidated world

    And although their love and caring
    Reaches out to all
    They are confronted by the medium
    Of a cold and thoughtless wall

    There are some who consider
    Beauty a mere encrustation of the scene
    A pretty decoration
    In the garden of their concrete

    They look ever for the quality
    They are to receive
    From the payment
    Of its service

    There are those among us
    Who do not care
    In which way
    You express devotion

    They do not give a single thought
    To your race
    Your colour
    Or religion

    It is they who see
    All the diversity inherent in all its propensity
    To feel the need
    To answer all the questions

    There are some among us
    Who celebrate the weapon
    Their answer hangs on death
    With the bullet and the bomb

    There are those who think obscenity
    Is in the sexual act of procreation
    And they condemn the art of lovemaking
    While watching the latest Hollywood war film

    There are those on this planet
    Who condemn and demean
    Every human aspect
    Of our God inspired creation

    They who would haul us all
    Into the shadow of their own self denial
    And feed us to the guillotine
    Of their twisted sick disconnected

    While they
    Feed upon
    Our world







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      Happy Sunday ~*~

    Your pieces, as I read and feel them, are full-spectrum observances!

    I feel guilt, I feel introspection, I feel empowerment and I sympathize but with a sense of responsibilITy.

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