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    dots Submission Name: Left to Writedots

    Author: Specdro
    ASL Info:    28/Of Course/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 20/53/37
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       I wrote this on a ramble. Its as close as I have come to some sort of free form. I don't think that I have completed this piece but Im not sure what to change, where to go with it, or even how to keep up with what I got. Thoughts? :)


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    The story of my life is unwritten.
    I'm just living with what I was given.

    Some ink.
    The ability to think.

    So many thoughts don't get processed and lost.
    Questions and answers spread like cancer as my pen dances across the paper etching my words into eternity.
    Fascinated by the facets of every situation,
    simple mundane things intrigue my imagination.
    Making the best of my trials, I'm a scholar of the streets with no true education.

    Finding focus when gazing through an old looking glass.
    Learning all I know from the experiences of my past.
    No one known has ever shown me that there's no gift like the present, its something I learned naturally based on life's lessons.

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