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    dots Submission Name: Become Betterdots

    Author: Childe-Wrote
    Elite Ratio:    1.78 - 17/53/44
    Words: 241
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 587
    Average Vote:    3.5000
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    dotsBecome Betterdots

    In this reality, that is a joke
    And the kids that are selling coke

    Who didn't dare to even dream
    And their life is wasting at the seam
    When the adults do nothing but condeem

    Young mamas on the corner
    Day in, day out - dawn to dusk

    Young mamas on the poles
    Like another pussycat doll
    After being pushed into a role

    It's the cocain that's making them fall
    And their guy is behind bars from another brawl

    All the pressure that loudly calls
    And the silence behind these walls

    When another demon plays buddy
    After the fight turned all bloody

    Forget the disappointment
    That is caused when you vent

    Forget the times you struck your mama
    And wished your daddy be dead
    With all that was said, you decided to fled

    This is your reality. Not his or hers. yours
    And you are still tripping on the shrooms
    With your anger being the fumes

    With the room still spinning
    And doing nothing but sinning
    With this being the beginning

    If someone had only said
    And now I'm the one treading

    Dream and become better than you are
    You will end up going far

    And the one on the coke, whose the joke
    And the one that disappoint, who does nothing but vent

    They will go far...
    You will see one day
    Yet have no say

    Submitted on 2011-06-12 15:38:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's very good, and I understand you. I think.... That the people on coke who were the jokes cause all the pain and stuff caused by their family or "whoever" make it one day. And the person stuck not trying to move on stays where they're at. Nicely put@lovely
    | Posted on 2011-06-13 00:00:00 | by DocTaylor88 | [ Reply to This ]

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