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Sun Centered MedITatION ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 11
Class/Type: Haiku /Nature
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A day of medITatION in ALL my chores/adventures with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


Sun Centered MedITatION ~*~



Sun-Centered Aware
CapturINg LIghT BEINg
Emanating IT
~*~




Submitted on 2011-06-12 19:53:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Great energy in this.
Little to be said, so much to get.
| Posted on 2011-06-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
  
Read your poem and liked it. It actualy made me close my eyes and think about the suns warmth. Haikus are nice.
| Posted on 2011-06-12 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]


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