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    dots Submission Name: Sun Centered MedITatION ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Haiku/Nature
    Total Views: 599
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 81



    Description:
       A day of medITatION in ALL my chores/adventures with Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


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    dotsSun Centered MedITatION ~*~dots
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    Sun-Centered Aware
    CapturINg LIghT BEINg
    Emanating IT
    ~*~




    Submitted on 2011-06-12 19:53:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Great energy in this.
    Little to be said, so much to get.
    | Posted on 2011-06-15 00:00:00 | by lori_tab | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Read your poem and liked it. It actualy made me close my eyes and think about the suns warmth. Haikus are nice.
    | Posted on 2011-06-12 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]


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