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    dots Submission Name: I treid to die...dots
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    Author: QueenRae
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       I wrote this when i was weaker than I am today...


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    dotsI treid to die...dots
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    I tried to die..
    Tried to take a stand.
    I sat on my bed razor in hand...
    Thinking of you I tried to give it my all
    Thinking of my love for you made my razor blade fall...
    You\'re the reason I started and then my tears grew.
    Your also the reason i\'m trying not to go on through..
    How could you leave didn\'t you care?
    I looked at the razor I could only stare...
    Your not worth my time.
    You never were.
    You\'ll regret the day, that you chose her.




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