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    dots Submission Name: After a Kissdots
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    Author: DocTaylor88
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 6/3/10
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
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    dotsAfter a Kissdots
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    First things first, lets say, "what's up"? Then say, "goodbye". Now you know the quarter is up. In your mind. Now we gotta fade a-way into "Time". Then you say that your not gay. But your alright! Then the devil wakes you up in your sleep. Cause everything is so commercial. This is just the "Soul-Less" creep of "Man"(humanConcience). Now we're gonna fade away. Into the Night. Then you say that your ok. But your "Alright". Then the devil wakes you up in your sleep. Cause everyone is so commercial. Not even a sound or a peep from me...




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