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Submission Name: Love So Tender dots

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Author:	DocTaylor88
Elite Ratio:	1.02 - 6/3/10
Words:	43

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
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Love So Tender dots

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21 Dec 2008, 05:27

If love so tough,

and love so tender,

you remind me close,

I should surrender,

If tempter so,

and afflicting gender,

its a fragile thing,

That love so tender.

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

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