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    dots Submission Name: The Con of Our Societydots
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    Author: DocTaylor88
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 6/3/10
    Words: 276
    Class/Type: Rant/Serious
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    A Country Growing Up…

    There’s only one way to start this off. In disregard to ala, I work for work already done. Work in which people have better certifications than me, in quote to mexihaters, “I’m taken your job”. If I couldn’t be what I wanted, then why were we taught that way? Life’s conspiracy is everything. Everything we live by and are still being taught. Its one big conspiracy! Just as god made man out of his own image. The people that made this country built it in there own image too. Lies! That fall down like in a game of Tetris and overlap more lies.

    The Mann

    The man is just one way to keep throwing everybody’s blame around without anyone getting too out of hand, in exceptions to the ones that do(and I won’t say who). Not that many do, but when someone does they always have a big way of showing it. Then that’s when the Mann comes in and sweeps him out. A cracker’s not gone until you eat it! That’s the kind of shit the Mann teaches us in order to bring us down. When really your not supposed to eat the cracker whole, but cut it up and eat it in sections. Business only leads to bigger issues. More weight on our backs. When crack made mainstream back in 1992(not accurate), you could say the Mann had been working hard in the back alley to deprive us of everything else. Thus smart to business, still belligerent and very chaotic to the world…That wasn’t using the system.


    System breakdown


    The solution




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