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Rise ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 13
Class/Type: Prose /Love
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It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood ~*~ Enjoy yours in Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


Rise ~*~



Golden Beams
Angelic Teams
ENERGY

Rise Awake
Lift Partake
SYNERGY

~*~




Submitted on 2011-06-14 09:31:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  This is like the "5 hour energy" of poetry. Small yet empowering. I like.
| Posted on 2011-06-15 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]


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