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    dots Submission Name: Rise ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 13
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
    Total Views: 547
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 127



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       It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood ~*~ Enjoy yours in Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


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    dotsRise ~*~dots
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    Golden Beams
    Angelic Teams
    ENERGY

    Rise Awake
    Lift Partake
    SYNERGY

    ~*~




    Submitted on 2011-06-14 09:31:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is like the "5 hour energy" of poetry. Small yet empowering. I like.
    | Posted on 2011-06-15 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]


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