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    dots Submission Name: Forget or Forbiddots
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    Author: snacky fish
    ASL Info:    31/male/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 377/472/111
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 792
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 674



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       Drop, wobble, warp, thump... dirty!


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    dotsForget or Forbiddots
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    Like sweet hell fire
    My heart burns
    Never to end
    Till nigh gods' will turns

    Forget or forbid
    These beats lasting so
    Dropping and warping
    Wobbling to and fro

    Like dirt and filth
    Calling death to stay
    Foolish in rebirth
    Reaper cross to flay?

    Forget or forbid
    His name be spoke
    The spook of lore
    Six orbits endmost awoke

    Like death itself
    My heart never ends
    Quiet and still
    Till Nigh lips mend

    Forget or Forbid
    A ghostly return
    A rose in grasp
    Beckoning seraphim to burn




    Submitted on 2011-06-15 23:32:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      "Six orbits endmost awoke"

    I like this line. The rest of the poem feels a bit repetitive...
    | Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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