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Author:	snacky fish
ASL Info:	31/male/FL
Elite Ratio:	3.76 - 377/472/111
Words:	92

Class/Type:	Poetry/Dark
Total Views:	909
Average Vote:	5.0000
Bytes:	674

Description:
Drop, wobble, warp, thump... dirty!

Forget or Forbid dots

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Like sweet hell fire
My heart burns
Never to end
Till nigh gods' will turns

Forget or forbid
These beats lasting so
Dropping and warping
Wobbling to and fro

Like dirt and filth
Calling death to stay
Foolish in rebirth
Reaper cross to flay?

Forget or forbid
His name be spoke
The spook of lore
Six orbits endmost awoke

Like death itself
My heart never ends
Quiet and still
Till Nigh lips mend

Forget or Forbid
A ghostly return
A rose in grasp
Beckoning seraphim to burn

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"Six orbits endmost awoke"

I like this line. The rest of the poem feels a bit repetitive...
| Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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