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    dots Submission Name: Sunshine Thoughtsdots

    Author: Rainin_Raspbery
    ASL Info:    22/F/Edmonton/AB/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 145/140/109
    Words: 100
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsSunshine Thoughtsdots

    Doesn’t always bring daises and roses,
    There’s always gunna be,
    A shadow cast,
    Somewhere in the world.

    This isn’t bad nor sad,
    It just simply means,
    We all have to try to strive.

    To see the sunray’s,
    Through the cloudy sky,
    Even though it can be tough,
    Life is meant to be rough,
    It’s the only way,
    To ensure,
    Our lives,
    Don’t suck.

    It’s a personal choice,
    Or it may be a sacrifice,
    Some learn young,
    Others old,
    Some never grow,
    But this is just a thought,
    That has traveled and stumbled,
    Across my mind.

    Submitted on 2011-06-17 15:09:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I love the imagery. It's dark yet optimistic, at least that's how I read it. I really like how thought provoking it is even though its vague. This is a fantastic piece, nothing to critique. Though there seems to have been a formatting error. It happens a lot when you write in Word and then copy and paste on here. Nothing vital, just makes it a bit hard to read if you can't look past it.

    Keep up the good work and I'll keep reading.

    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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