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    dots Submission Name: Pretty Grave diggerdots

    Author: snacky fish
    ASL Info:    31/male/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 377/472/111
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsPretty Grave diggerdots

    Oh pretty grave digger
    Please dig us one
    My frail heart
    Is utterly undone

    Oh pretty grave digger
    You know not
    My frail heart
    And what it could alot

    Oh pretty grave digger
    Join me here inside
    My frail heart
    Still feels though it died

    Oh pretty grave digger
    Touch me ever gentle
    My frail heart
    Is deathly sentimental

    Oh pretty grave digger
    Woe is my soul
    My frail heart
    Cannot pay your toll

    Submitted on 2011-06-17 23:38:29     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this idea of the pretty grave digger burying your heart. You do an excellent job of expounding on the theme.
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]
      This is a fantastic piece. Dark and sweet. I like how easily it flowed and how well it painted a picture.

    Keep up the great work and I'll keep reading.

    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by MinervaBlu | [ Reply to This ]

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