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The mystical hours
'tween 3 and 6
Where Dark and
The Great Exchange
Life in Bliss
Rise & Let YOUR Life BEGIN ~*~
| EPIC!||| Posted on 2011-06-21 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ] || Wow, until I saw shadow's comment, I was completely blanking on the concept of the poem. Now I see it and understand it rather well. It's a theme I've often expressed in my poetry, in much the same tongue-in-cheek manner as e cummings and other similar writers. For example, a stanza from "Orgone" (Feb 3, 2009):|
"Stamen twist and shake,
feel the raw static energy
of life in your bones.
Stay the flower until it sends life into the wind."
As usual, I find the best way to comment on any other poetry is to share poetry of my own. It communicates things better than I can normally, and besides, it's always like a small gift.
Rearrange, I love that word.
|| Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ] || What a wonderful way to describe conception. It made me feel good and smile too. Thanks for brightening my day.||| Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ] |