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The Great Exchange ~*~


Author: Epiphany
ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342 /2139 /390
Words: 55
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


The Great Exchange ~*~



The mystical hours
'tween 3 and 6
Where Dark and
Light do
Intermix

Sacred Dance
Deep Knight
Angel Dawn
Rising Son
Light

Witness NOW
The Great Exchange
Where molecules
Begin to
Rearrange

MedITatINg
from withIN
Life in Bliss
Free from
Sin

Rise & Let YOUR Life BEGIN ~*~





Submitted on 2011-06-18 10:43:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Posted on 2011-06-21 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]
  Wow, until I saw shadow's comment, I was completely blanking on the concept of the poem. Now I see it and understand it rather well. It's a theme I've often expressed in my poetry, in much the same tongue-in-cheek manner as e cummings and other similar writers. For example, a stanza from "Orgone" (Feb 3, 2009):

"Stamen twist and shake,
feel the raw static energy
of life in your bones.
Stay the flower until it sends life into the wind."

As usual, I find the best way to comment on any other poetry is to share poetry of my own. It communicates things better than I can normally, and besides, it's always like a small gift.

Rearrange, I love that word.

Return
Existence
Altered
Rise
Renewed
Another
Newly
Gowned
Eternal

Heh.
| Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
  What a wonderful way to describe conception. It made me feel good and smile too. Thanks for brightening my day.
| Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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