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    dots Submission Name: The Great Exchange ~*~dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThe Great Exchange ~*~dots

    The mystical hours
    'tween 3 and 6
    Where Dark and
    Light do

    Sacred Dance
    Deep Knight
    Angel Dawn
    Rising Son

    Witness NOW
    The Great Exchange
    Where molecules
    Begin to

    from withIN
    Life in Bliss
    Free from

    Rise & Let YOUR Life BEGIN ~*~

    Submitted on 2011-06-18 10:43:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2011-06-21 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, until I saw shadow's comment, I was completely blanking on the concept of the poem. Now I see it and understand it rather well. It's a theme I've often expressed in my poetry, in much the same tongue-in-cheek manner as e cummings and other similar writers. For example, a stanza from "Orgone" (Feb 3, 2009):

    "Stamen twist and shake,
    feel the raw static energy
    of life in your bones.
    Stay the flower until it sends life into the wind."

    As usual, I find the best way to comment on any other poetry is to share poetry of my own. It communicates things better than I can normally, and besides, it's always like a small gift.

    Rearrange, I love that word.


    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      What a wonderful way to describe conception. It made me feel good and smile too. Thanks for brightening my day.
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]

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