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    dots Submission Name: The Great Exchange ~*~dots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 55
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 716
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       Love, Peace, Joy, Abundance, Beauty & Prosperous Healthy Smiles to Share ;-) ;-) ;-)


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    dotsThe Great Exchange ~*~dots
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    The mystical hours
    'tween 3 and 6
    Where Dark and
    Light do
    Intermix

    Sacred Dance
    Deep Knight
    Angel Dawn
    Rising Son
    Light

    Witness NOW
    The Great Exchange
    Where molecules
    Begin to
    Rearrange

    MedITatINg
    from withIN
    Life in Bliss
    Free from
    Sin

    Rise & Let YOUR Life BEGIN ~*~





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      EPIC!
    | Posted on 2011-06-21 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow, until I saw shadow's comment, I was completely blanking on the concept of the poem. Now I see it and understand it rather well. It's a theme I've often expressed in my poetry, in much the same tongue-in-cheek manner as e cummings and other similar writers. For example, a stanza from "Orgone" (Feb 3, 2009):

    "Stamen twist and shake,
    feel the raw static energy
    of life in your bones.
    Stay the flower until it sends life into the wind."

    As usual, I find the best way to comment on any other poetry is to share poetry of my own. It communicates things better than I can normally, and besides, it's always like a small gift.

    Rearrange, I love that word.

    Return
    Existence
    Altered
    Rise
    Renewed
    Another
    Newly
    Gowned
    Eternal

    Heh.
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by AsiaticFox | [ Reply to This ]
      What a wonderful way to describe conception. It made me feel good and smile too. Thanks for brightening my day.
    | Posted on 2011-06-18 00:00:00 | by my shadow | [ Reply to This ]


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