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    dots Submission Name: Soapbox Poeticsdots
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    Author: arkayye
    Elite Ratio:    2.98 - 69/109/51
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 353
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1070



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    dotsSoapbox Poeticsdots
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    Into a new dark age
    we go, marching,
    careening headlong

    [of soapbox poetry
    there is no want
    for many a voice
    loudly rail and rant]

    the terrain of our
    condition and that
    of our experience
    has changed over
    year upon year of
    progress that has brought
    us closer to the edge
    of a generation that
    lives on the horizon

    itself

    peering further on

    beyond

    to challenges invisible
    to our yet untrained minds

    so a new era begins
    pioneering unexplored
    vastnesses and
    before unrecognised
    darknesses

    while on the remotest reaches
    bright lights we have yet

    to define and harness
    beckon
    to our whetted appetite
    for tomorrows





    Into itself, beyond vast darkness, remote lights beckon our tomorrow.



    `




    Submitted on 2011-06-20 03:21:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I prefer sandbox poetry! :) There shouldn't be limits to poetry...

    Good write!
    | Posted on 2011-07-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      The "Pretty cool" vote sounded lame so i didn't put it. But the poem is pretty dang good. All I can say is keep up the good work. For keeping it Real and what not.
    | Posted on 2011-06-20 00:00:00 | by DocTaylor88 | [ Reply to This ]


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