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    dots Submission Name: This I missdots
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    Author: TiaanK
    ASL Info:    37/M/Dancing in the dark
    Elite Ratio:    4 - 22/27/28
    Words: 152
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsThis I missdots
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    I miss you,
    I miss you so much

    Nothing feels the same
    To be honest,
    just about everything,
    feels like nothing
    I still haven't figured out
    and I still have my doubt,
    as to why there must be
    a bad end
    to every good endeavour
    I thought we were going to
    live forever?
    But reality hits hardest,
    when it hits you right at home
    So now I'm here,
    alone,
    and,
    I miss your smile
    I miss your tears
    I miss comforting you
    I miss your scars and short comings
    I miss saying goodnight
    I miss hearing you say my name,
    and the way you said it
    I miss the time when everything felt right,
    and the future somehow seemed bright
    But most all,

    I miss your wings,
    wrapped around my heart
    Unconditional love,
    in love,
    in complete submissiveness
    This I miss



    - Tiaan Koekemoer 2011




    Submitted on 2011-06-20 14:18:40     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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