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    dots Submission Name: vampiredots
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    Author: bones1971
    Elite Ratio:    1.62 - 0/0/1
    Words: 102
    Class/Type: Story/Love
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    Description:
       its the beginning of a vampire story


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    dotsvampiredots
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    it was a rainy morning in april a young couple walked on the wet streets of halsteren.
    suddenly they heard a very hard sound.
    whats that? it was a young girl aged 15 who was attacked by a vampire and she was covered with blood and her ears were gone.
    lets go to her and help her before she turns int o avampire too. the took a stick from a tree and put it in her heart. when they did that she smiled and said thanx. they were happy they could help her and promissed to get the vampire and kill him.




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