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    Author: Solomon Disease
    ASL Info:    101, male, earth
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 284/292/104
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 588
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 604



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    Return to that song once heard
    The heart thirsts for fuel for its fire

    Consider a pen
    It writes
    Emotions
    Feelings
    Thoughts
    Ideas
    Lyrics
    Poems
    Songs
    It draws

    Expressing the things from deep inside
    Looking, listening, seeing, hearing
    But not realizing meaning
    Till many years past
    Sitting on the balcony again
    A different one from many years ago

    The conclusion floats gently to the surface
    You reach out your hand and touch it
    It becomes real




    Submitted on 2011-06-22 09:45:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this. I feel that most writers, especially poets can relate to it on a very personal level.
    I always look back at writes that I did years ago, sometimes I smile at them, sometimes I shake my head in disgust "what was i thinking?"
    And sometimes I really just stop and admire what the gateways past writing open up. A spin down nostalgia lane, its just as you say "real".
    Also with just inspiration in general. I like the word choice, the imagery of the conclusion floating gently, i pictured a piece of paper floating in wind.
    I like to think of the balcony symbol as being like an omnipresence of yourself, that watches over your creative works as a catharsis, if that makes any sense at all im kinad just blabbering.

    But I really did enjoy this!

    Matt
    | Posted on 2011-06-24 00:00:00 | by OneDarkFlame92 | [ Reply to This ]


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