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    dots Submission Name: Air'O Plainsdots
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    Author: DocTaylor88
    Elite Ratio:    1.02 - 6/3/10
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAir'O Plainsdots
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    Living like a renegade,
    I can see the air'o plains.

    See the colors getting square now,
    Locked stocked and in your face.

    Momentum beating perfect,
    I can see the colors fade.

    But nowhere to go now,
    And I can see the air'o plains

    Air'o Plains, Air'o Plains, Air'o Plains, Yeah, yeah.

    I can see the colors fade.

    Air'o plains in your face O Yeah eh yeah!.
    Locked stocked in your face.

    I can see the purple reign, I can see the air'o planes. O yeah.




    Submitted on 2011-06-23 22:30:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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