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    dots Submission Name: Rosesdots
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    Author: madsmurph99
    ASL Info:    13/female/Parma,OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.61 - 17/9/17
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 497
    Average Vote:    1.0000
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    dotsRosesdots
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    You say your sorry but your not.
    I asked for a knight in shining armor not an idiot wrapped in tinfoil
    I don't want to love a man that makes excuses and gives me roses to make up for it
    Roses don't fix anything
    You may think they do but they don't
    So I'm gonna do myself a favor and throw away your roses and your love
    Because you're a pathetic excuse for a knight
    I may miss you for awhile but I will let you go and get on with my life
    So I can find my real knight in shining armor




    Submitted on 2011-06-25 11:12:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Guys appreciate a reason for being dumped, at least. I think you did that to some extent so that's good. The roses thing, someone tells us that women like them, appreciate them, let you know we care, etc. The majority of guys have no idea what makes women tick so don't assume they do.

    That would be "you're" as in "you are" as opposed to "your" which is a possessive form.

    Lloyd
    | Posted on 2012-06-29 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]
      Truly heartfelt and emotional. I believe we all at one time or another have encountered these romantic issues. Great expression. Nicely written.
    | Posted on 2011-07-01 00:00:00 | by peepeye | [ Reply to This ]


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