Description: I don't like the semi-colon, but without it the sentence structure requires an "is" which breaks the whole haiku thing. butterfly wings and fragile heart are indispensable. tell me if you can think of a better formulation. I feel like an entire series could be made using the image of butterfly wings.
are butterfly wings
liberated when Pride let's
go, and flies away?
my only gripe would be that they're too easy.
butterfly wings are
often lost in the midst of
bed linens and dreams
Submission Name: Papillon bleu
