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    dots Submission Name: Stop and Remember!!dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/380
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Spoof/Friendship
    Total Views: 539
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       dont ask its a happy peice think i'm doing drugs i am unaware of normally not my style don't kick me too hard!


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    dotsStop and Remember!!dots
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    Today's a brand new day!
    LOOK, look outside the sun shines down upon us all
    Take a step back!
    Remember what you are fighting for
    Remember who you are living this life for!?!
    YOU!!!

    Never forget keep your friends close
    But your enemies closer
    Keep trucking along
    I know times aren't easy
    I know money is scarce
    Nevertheless I got faith

    YES! I have faith in you!

    Friend you got it all just never forget your goals never allow others to bring you down
    Hold your head high
    Accept credit where credit is due
    Yet never pass the buck with your own mistakes
    You are only shorting yourself in the end!
    Soon you will succeed! You will prevail!
    I’ll be there for ya every step of the way!!!!




    Submitted on 2011-06-30 02:44:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      We all are doing drugs. :)

    I like the positive and inspiring vibe of this piece.
    | Posted on 2011-07-01 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Trust in CHRIST first, then yourself and lastly your best friend.
    Life is too short to spend time worrying about past wrongs, forgive your self, then forgive your enemies last, but do forgive them.
    A very timely write, one for all.
    | Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by DUSTYTU | [ Reply to This ]
      I feel like I can do anything now!! Look out world here I come!! HI-5!!!
    | Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by snacky fish | [ Reply to This ]
      I like how this addresses, everything from being there to believing in yourself, great job
    | Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by tas | [ Reply to This ]


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