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    dots Submission Name: Cadence of the Heartdots
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    Author: Specdro
    ASL Info:    28/Of Course/NY
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 20/53/37
    Words: 29
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsCadence of the Heartdots
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    Left,
    A heart broken.

    Left,
    Words unspoken.

    Left,
    Everything behind.

    Write,
    It's how I get by.

    Left,
    The future.




    Submitted on 2011-06-30 12:59:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I agree with Jacob. It's short, sweet and the emotions it expresses are something everyone on here should relate with. I'll definately read more of your stuff.
    | Posted on 2011-07-01 00:00:00 | by Mimevas Lemqi | [ Reply to This ]
      like a boxing left/right combo with the play on "write"---

    its should be it's

    otherwise--

    short and sweet---simple but in an understated way---

    jacob
    | Posted on 2011-06-30 00:00:00 | by jacoberin | [ Reply to This ]


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